Why this Service

Most product descriptions list features.
But customers don’t buy features, they buy clarity.

If your description doesn’t clearly explain why you chose each ingredient or material, it blends in with every other listing.
This service rewrites your description so your product immediately makes sense to the customer, without fluff or hype.

What You'll Get?

You’ll receive:

A clear headline and sub-headline

A “Before vs After” comparison

Perfect for: skincare, handmade jewelry, candles, soaps, aromatherapy, wellness items, and any handcrafted product that needs clearer value.

A rewritten 150–250 word description

Highlight of the reasoning behind your key ingredients or materials

Simple, human language that helps customers trust your craft

Delivery within 24 hours

Before / After

Showing why the formula exists creates instant trust.

Before:
“Made with Blue Tansy and Squalane to hydrate and soothe redness.”

After:
“Blue Tansy calms irritation on the surface, while olive-derived Squalane sinks deeper into the layer where dehydration actually begins.
Together they restore balance without leaving a heavy or oily feel.”

What other makers experienced

“Customers understood the stone combination better. Saved me time answering questions.”

- Jewelry seller on Etsy

“After the new description, people finally ‘got’ why we used Blue Tansy. My conversion rate improved on that product.”

- Handmade skincare brand

These are small early results from indie brands who asked for clarity-focused rewrites:

“The rewrite made the scent story feel intentional instead of decorative. Helped us stand out in search.”

- Candle maker

$29 (limited rate for early clients)
Future rate: $39–$59

How does it work?

1 - You send me the product page

2- I review the current copy

3- I rewrite the whole copy

4- I send a PDF file + the new copy ready to copy and paste

5- Delivery withing 24 hours

Simple, fast, and focused on clarity.

Not sure if it’s right for you?

Send me your product link and I’ll show you a quick sample before you decide.

(for a free mini suggestion)

Use this discount code for early clients:
G5ODE5MQ

I’ve worked with indie brands across jewelry, skincare, candles, and wellness, helping them simplify their product pages and communicate value clearly.

My work focuses on clarity, emotional precision, and showing the decisions behind every ingredient or material.

FAQs

How long does delivery take?

Within 24 hours.

Do you rewrite multiple products?

Yes, add-ons available after your first order.

Do you offer refunds?

If you feel the rewrite didn’t improve clarity, I offer a full refund.

Will it improve my sales?

Clarity usually increases buyer confidence, which can improve conversions.
I can’t guarantee specific numbers, but a clearer explanation of why your product exists makes it easier for people to choose it.

Can I use this on Etsy / Shopify / Instagram?

Yes.
You’ll receive a clean, ready-to-paste version that works on any platform.